Tajay, you have done a fairly detailed analysis of the front cover and you write well. I would like you to have analysed the genre more carefully, and thought about how the coverlines link to the contents page. which categories were used in the contents page and were these conventional? And the images? The analysis of the DPS is rather brief and you have not analysed the images or the journalistic language in sufficient detail. You need to do part b of the task- find the press pack and annotate it, and find out about the publisher. You also need to think about which ideas you get from this case study for your own magazine. Vanessa
Tajay, you have done a fairly detailed analysis of the front cover and you write well. I would like you to have analysed the genre more carefully, and thought about how the coverlines link to the contents page. which categories were used in the contents page and were these conventional? And the images? The analysis of the DPS is rather brief and you have not analysed the images or the journalistic language in sufficient detail. You need to do part b of the task- find the press pack and annotate it, and find out about the publisher. You also need to think about which ideas you get from this case study for your own magazine. Vanessa
ReplyDeleteWhere are the improvements I suggested above?VC
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