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This is a nice piece of journalism Tajay. Your write well and you follow a clear structure, drawing on research and using appropriate journalistic language. You have considered elements of layout such as columns, colour scheme and headers. There could be more attention to detail, for example with sub-heads, stand firsts, drop caps and captions. But overall a nice first attempt at Desk Top Publishing. Now where is your evaluation??? Vanessa
Your layout is well organised, and the pictures are suitable for your target audience, The use of your images and background colour make your article standout. Your journalistic language is suitable for your target audience. To improve your work you could have used Drop caps, Pull quotes and lastly you could find artist opinions on the music industry / piracy to make your article more professional
ReplyDeleteThis is a nice piece of journalism Tajay. Your write well and you follow a clear structure, drawing on research and using appropriate journalistic language. You have considered elements of layout such as columns, colour scheme and headers. There could be more attention to detail, for example with sub-heads, stand firsts, drop caps and captions. But overall a nice first attempt at Desk Top Publishing. Now where is your evaluation??? Vanessa
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